The day we went to Gallifrey

My eyes open slowly, I take a long breath "Are we there yet" My brother asked "No not yet sweetheart" said Mom in her loving voice
"Mom?.." I said it like, she wasen't really there.
"Yes?" said Mom "Oh nothing" I said.
I was confused very confused.- My eyes feel heavier and heavier until i fall asleep

Screaming..loud loud screaming I cough were am I? I think to myself
"Oh my god dad,mom" I run over to them checking their pulses
I feel a tare slide down my face like a river

"Exo..." I hear from behind me "Brother!" I said in a loud voice
"I'll carry you Brother we will run until you're safe"
I walk out of the crashed ship It's burning I can't feel anything the only feeling have is a desire..A desire to save my brother from the fires
It has begun, The Time War
The Last Great Time War
We ran for hours We are finally outside the Citadel I hear the sound, The Sound of hope in my ears, It's a TARDIS
And then..And then i hear the voice of The Devil himself, A dalek
They fought eachother.
After a long battle, The Dalek won I ran over to The Tardis, "Leave me Exo" Said my brother..My hearts skipped a beat..I stopped "NO!"
"But you have to, If the dalek go after you it will be a waste, I am crippled and about to die you will escape Goodbye Exo" I run over to The TARDIS with tears in my eye they fall down as the wind cathes them like leaves on a tree

I enter the TARDIS..I am saved

Very very good!! I love reading fanfics featuring OC Time Lords and seeing the Time War from all their different points of view!!

Thank you!

I've never quite read one like that before though. The Lieutenant was seen in the story as a baby, then we zoomed forward 8 years to when she was fighting the Time War.